"Find and Replace" vs. "To Be" Verbs

Was this exercise effective? How did it impact your writing?

In this exercise we had to replace these boring words with interesting verbs. I went through my entire essay searching for these “boring words”. I must admit I had a few. It wasn’t easy trying to replace each one of them. I spend minutes brain storming which verb would perfectly fit in right. Once I finished this exercise, my informative essay was way more entertaining to read. Definitely, this exercise transformed my essay’s syntax in a positive way.  

Castillo de San Felipe del Morro (First draft)

Christopher Columbus, an Italian explorer, landed in Puerto Rico on November 19, 1493. There he found the “taínos,” peaceful and generous Indians that inhabited Puerto Rico. They called the island “Borikén.” Columbus named the island San Juan Bautista in honor of Saint John the Baptist. Juan Ponce de León became the first governor of Puerto Rico. The taínos were forced into slavery.

Puerto Rico’s geographic position in the Caribbean makes the port of San Juan one of the most important ports in the Spanish domain. King Phillip IV named Puerto Rico the most coveted port by their enemies. San Juan served as an important port-of-call for ships of all European nations for purposes of taking on water, food and other commercial provisions and mercantile exchange.  Various forts were built to protect the strategic port of San Juan from numerous European invasion attempts.

In 1539, King Charles V of Spain authorized the construction of Castillo San Felipe del El Morro. Named in honor of King Phillip II. Castillo de San Felipe del Morro is located in San Juan, Puerto Rico. This fort was built in the entrance to the San Juan Bay to protect the Old San Juan City from enemies. They needed to control the entry to the harbor and protect the port of San Juan.

Reflective Blog

In "Are We Losing Our Edge?", we can see how the writer blurs the lines between open and closed form prose when the article starts being fun to read. Even though, the author presents us several different stories as examples. He doesn’t lose the main point. This article seems to have secondary research. The author presents details about the best universities in the United States to study science or mathematics, and people who first study here in the United States and ended up doing research in other countries.

In the second article, it happens the same thing, even though it seems to be written more as an open form prose. As you read the informative article "The Sociology of Suds", it seems that you are reading a narrative. Narratives are usually entertaining.  The author must have done some primary research- for example, one or more interviews- to be able to write this story about Mr. Lee. Mr. Lee is a sweet old man who had a Laundromat in a small neighborhood. This article narrates every single thing Mr. Lee used to do. The author combines words creating a smooth syntax, which makes this a pleasant article to read. 

If I had to steal a “technique”, I would definitely steal the second’s article “technique” of writing an informative article as a narrative. I felt that "The Sociology of Suds" was so much fun to read because I couldn’t stop reading until the end. Besides the author’s word choice, this article presents a cute story about a man who helped everyone in his neighborhood. 

Works Cited (2)

Los Fuertes del Viejo San Juan. Washington, D.C.: Eastern National, 2002. Print.

This book explains the history of every single fort in Old San Juan, P.R. Castillo de San Felipe del Morro as know as El Morro was named in honor of the Spanish king Felipe II. Juan Bautista was the one who design and built this fort in XVII century.

Lighthouse Friends. “Puerto San Juan (El Morro), P.R.” 2001.Web. 06 Oct 2011. http://www.lighthousefriends.com/light.asp?ID=1165

Puerto Rico’s first lighthouse was built in El Morro. This lighthouse was destroyed during the Spanish-American War in May of 1898. After the Americans gained control of Puerto Rico, they began to build another one.

El Morro (Photo Essay)

Keep in Touch (Final Draft)

One day, I received an email invitation to social network called Facebook. I decided to sign in. Nowadays, I have everything on Facebook, my photos, my friends, my videos, etc. The best way to keep in touch with your friends is Facebook. People you haven’t seen in years, you can find them on Facebook.

                       When I opened my Facebook account, I started to look for my peers from Elementary School and I added them as friends. I didn’t know a thing about my best friend from childhood, but I did remember her name. One day, I was bored, tired, laying in my bed, so I started typing my best friend’s name in the search bar. Loading, loading, loading. There she was; it was her profile, for sure. I was so excited I found her because, even though we haven’t spoken during so many years, I still love her, she is my best friend and best friends aren’t easy to find. I was so glad that I found her because now I will get to know more about her. I believe that people come in to your life with a purpose. Sometimes, people just never left. My friend is one of those persons who came in my life and never left. It doesn’t matter the distance in between us; our friendship has never changed.

                      The next day, the sun rising, early in he morning, I get on Facebook and I see one notification. We were officially friends at Facebook. She was so different from when I last saw her. We started chatting about how our lives have change during all those years without seeing each other. A week later, we actually had a friends date. I was so happy to meet her again. It was as if we never stopped talking. We have been friends since we were born, so she is a sister for me. I can tell her anything because I know she is going to keep my secret. Now, I don’t get to see her that often because we are studying in different states, but we have actually established a great communication between Facebook.  Facebook has everything-status, photos, wall posts, comments- you need to keep in touch with your friends. Sometime I feel like telling her something and it is so easy, I just go to her Facebook profile and post a comment in her wall saying “I LOVE YOUUU <3” or “I MISSS YOUUU L-with a sad face-”.

Sometimes I post on her wall, “Skype date?”

She replies: “Yesss!! Get online tonight”.

I wrote: “See you there ; ) !”

                       It’s 6:00 P.M., I’m sitting in front of my computer, suddenly, ring, ringgg, ring. She is calling me through Skype. I accept. The video camera turns on. There she is, I’m seeing her. I can hear her clearly. I tell her: “How are you? How’s college?” This is just the beginning of a long, long conversation.

                      I have also met friends through Facebook. Sometimes, bored people add people randomly without really knowing them face-to-face. One day, I received a friend request form this cute guy, so I accepted. I just look at his profile only once. Suddenly, he started talking to me. Hours passed, days passed, months passed, we use to talk every single day and we even text all day long. We became best friends. After a year without really seeing him, I really met him for the first time. When I saw him, I gave him a big, big, big and strong hug. It felt so good to finally meet someone you just have known through Internet and phone.

When he first saw me, he said: “Finally, I get to meet you face-to-face”.

I said: “Yes! It feels great to get to know how you look in real life.”

                      Then, we went to get some drinks at the bar.  He was very gentle.  He introduced me to his friends. They were all super nice. We stay there for three hours. It was 1:45 A.M. It was time for me to go home. I said “Bye” to everyone, but he didn’t let me walk alone to my car. Therefore, he walk with me to the car and we were just friends! -This tells me that he really cares about me-. We arrive to my car. I told I had a great time and gave him a kiss on the cheek.  

                      That’s not all, Facebook, also, gives you the opportunity to communicate with your long distance family. People usually get to see their complete family only in holidays. I have family in New Jersey, New York, and Orlando. I don’t see them as much as I would like, but in Facebook I have all my family as friends and I chat a lot with my cousins. My cousins can actually call me through Facebook. Video calling is the last application on Facebook and it’s awesome. You can see people face-to-face through your computer. When I have time, I just look for them on Facebook to ask them how are they doing, if everything is fine and to tell them how much I miss them and that I will come visit them as soon as I can. Without Facebook, I wouldn’t be able to talk as much as I want with my family, but since it’s so easy to keep in touch with them through Facebook, we are constantly in communication. For example, first week of college, I was so rush with my classes and trying to find the classrooms, I forgot about everything. Every day I get home to sleep because I was tired. I week after, I receive a notification on my iPhone. “Hey, where have you been? I MISS YOU!” It was my cousin from Orlando. I replied: “Sorry, I have been busy. Get online on Facebook chat." That day I chat a little with my cousin. I told her everything about my first week of college. I even said “Hi” to my uncle and my aunt.

                      Technology was created to make human lives easier, but sometimes people get too much into technology and forget about life. I know people who are completely addicted to Facebook. They can’t live without Facebook on your phones. People receive notifications directly to their phones, and log in to Facebook as soon as they can to check. Facebook is so addictive that sometimes when I need to study, I don’t know how to start because I stay in Facebook talking with my friends and losing my time. Hours later, you can see procrastinating with homework. Some of the application on Facebook, for example, Farmville, is very addictive. Farmville became so popular because people were addicted to that game. They played all day and forget about their duties. One day, I saw on the news that I mom didn’t clean her house neither make food to her child because she spent all day playing on Farmville.

                      Facebook has united friends from all over the world; it doesn’t matter where are you currently living. Nowadays, it’s way easier to keep in touch with your friends than before. People used to move out and never get to see your neighbors/friends again. That’s doesn’t happen now. Communication improves everyday a little more. It could be for good or for bad. It strongly depends on how you use it. If you take advantage of the opportunity that the technology offers you to help you make assignments easier for you, it’s fine. In the other hand, if you prefer been on your iPhone than living your life, then you are going in the wrong path.